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Linda's avatar

Amazing experience and amazing writing!!

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This is remarkable writing — it brought me straight back to being a kid watching Nature on PBS when George Page narrated.

I used to get extra excited whenever the episode slipped into those underwater worlds, especially after we finally got our first color TV. There was a kind of reverence in those moments — like seeing a hidden chamber of the planet.

The way you describe sinking through that blue… I felt that.

That surrender, that ancient memory, that smallness that feels like a kind of truth.

I’ve never dived Komodo, but reading this makes me wonder what other corners of the planet hold stories this intense — and how many we’ll never fully extract from the deep.

Beautiful work.

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